Welcome to my English world

On this blog I will be posting every week different chapters of different stories!

martes, 22 de septiembre de 2015

Welcome to my English world

Hilary's Aunt 


Beginning: Hilary Smith belonged to a good family. Hilary had some trouble with the bank about a few checks, so he was sent off to Australia immediately. He did not like Australia, and Australia did not like Hilary, so he took the earliest opportunity of returning to England. He did not had much money, so he had to wait until his father and brother died. After his father and brother died he received all the money which belonged to the good family. 

Middle: Hilary soon spent the money, so he had two options.. die or work, but suddenly he remembered that he had an aunt. Hilary discovered his aunt's address by talking to the family lawyer. He go to Aunt's house to visit her, he had only sixpence in his pocket at the time. He realized that his Aunt was very sick, so he felt so sad and very annoyed. He was going to be alone again in the world. After a few months passed, Hilary's financial problems became serious. He needed aunt's money really bad. Mary's will was made when she was a 21 year girl. Hilary wanted the money so he recommended to make a new will.. but he didn't knew if that will would be positive for him or negative so he double the amount and make his aunt sleep because he did not wanted her to make a new will 'cause he knew that if she does not the money would be yours. Hilary just put her to sleep.

Ending: When the old servant leaved the house, Hilary add more medicine to the glass of water, that was a perfect plan for him to do. The old woman realized that Hilary was trying to kill her for the money, so before she drink the medicine told him that if she was going to die this time, all the money was going to China but if she don't he will have all the money.. Hilary tried to take the glass away but she did not wanted to.. so she drank the medicine and died. 

Hilary was a selfish person, cold and he didn't cared about the others.. he only wanted to spend money in silly things, he wanted a reach life. He was stupid, he should not do this to his aunt.. she was family, that happened to him because he was an ugly person. 
Hahaha i thought that "Hilary" was a woman's name, it was really difficult for me to finally realize that Hilary was a man y had to read it like four times haha

1 comentario:

  1. Good job.
    Can you find a grammar and a capitalization mistake in: "Hilary was a selfish person, cold and he didn't cared about the others.. he only wanted to spend money in silly things"

    ResponderBorrar